Today we printed out in A2 to see how our designs to to scale and from a distance. We then critiqued our work, with tutors and peers
This piece has the most potential
- Can't read text from a distance, work on hierarchy and size
- Play with making the type part of the graphics rather than just a tagline
- Jacquie likes the skull disappearing into background - play with that more
- Both designs are very centred, try different compositions to allow readers' eyes to move
- Try moving the skull off the frame
- Grey is very ghostly which works well, also try some with colour
- Phone one isn't as strong, isn't very fresh, doesn't have much potential and most homeless people don't have smart phones. It's a good design but not great and not very punchy
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