"Does anyone have a place I can sleep? It's really cold
Further iteration of the same concept
Needs some indication of time for the 'seen' time to be relevant
Added time at top and made the time since it's been seen longer ago
Needs the heading and tag line
The marginalisation of the homeless community
Ideas for heading
- Don't ignore the facts, over 2000 New Zealanders are homeless
- Don't ignore it. Anyone can become homeless
- What if this was your friend? Don't ignore it
- It can happen to anyone. Homelessness effects more than 2000 Kiwis. Don't ignore it.
- Seen but not heard. Don't ignore the homeless
- What if this was you? Don't ignore it.
- In sight, out of mind
Darker for more impact, phone seems to glow more
Trying different compositions with text







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