Session one.
-Visual solution clear enough
-Central issue clear because of text
-Both are visually engaging
-Beanie in skull poster needs to be more ragged
-Try colour in the text one, red perhaps?
-Try dropping the skull's opacity rather than blurring it
-People liked the simple colour palette
-Placement of skull much better
someone had a similar theme to mine though their fact said 'over 40,000' rather than 2000. These are two different facts, they're focusing more on 'secondary homelessness' which is sleeping in cars, at friend's houses and not actually having a home, where as my fact is solely people who sleep rough on the street. I should maybe make this more clear though
Further research to prove it/double check
http://www.radionz.co.nz/news/national/305536/one-in-100-nzers-are-homeless-study
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